A STORY. A PRODUCT OF CLASSROOM BOREDOM
"Tony was a junior college student. Maria was his classmate in algebra. Tony has been courting her for the past few months. She was really feeling something special for Tony, maybe the man of her life has come. But, she felt choked, like her world was closing in everytime they were together. Until the day came that Maria can't take it anymore. She suddenly left Tony out in the cold. She became cold to Tony. They were not on speaking terms until Tony finally had the guts to ask her the questions he'd always wanted to ask.
"Why did you leave me? How dare you do that!!" shouted Tony. "You didn't have to choke me with your feelings! I can feel your love. I can feel that you care. You didn't have to be jealous. You didn't have to be insecure. You didn't have to do that! You never had to do that!" Maria shot back, her eyes welling up with tears, but visibly mad. "Why didn't you tell me earlier? I would've changed for you! I will do anything to have you. Or better yet, why didn't you just slap me in the face? That could've put me in my place. But why leaving me in the cold? Why? I'm pleading to you. Why?" I didn't tell you because I didn't want you to get hurt. That's the last thing I want to do to you. Believe me. Please believe me... And I'm very sorry... I... I... love you..." "What?" Tony replied, with an obvious change of mood. "You...love me...?" He was starting to feel real happy, when Maria replied: "Tony, I would love to love you. I think you're really, really special. You'll always be. But if you really love me..." "What? I will do anything..." "If you really love me... can you let me go?"
What do you think? Feedback will really be appreciated.
Peace out!
"Tony was a junior college student. Maria was his classmate in algebra. Tony has been courting her for the past few months. She was really feeling something special for Tony, maybe the man of her life has come. But, she felt choked, like her world was closing in everytime they were together. Until the day came that Maria can't take it anymore. She suddenly left Tony out in the cold. She became cold to Tony. They were not on speaking terms until Tony finally had the guts to ask her the questions he'd always wanted to ask.
"Why did you leave me? How dare you do that!!" shouted Tony. "You didn't have to choke me with your feelings! I can feel your love. I can feel that you care. You didn't have to be jealous. You didn't have to be insecure. You didn't have to do that! You never had to do that!" Maria shot back, her eyes welling up with tears, but visibly mad. "Why didn't you tell me earlier? I would've changed for you! I will do anything to have you. Or better yet, why didn't you just slap me in the face? That could've put me in my place. But why leaving me in the cold? Why? I'm pleading to you. Why?" I didn't tell you because I didn't want you to get hurt. That's the last thing I want to do to you. Believe me. Please believe me... And I'm very sorry... I... I... love you..." "What?" Tony replied, with an obvious change of mood. "You...love me...?" He was starting to feel real happy, when Maria replied: "Tony, I would love to love you. I think you're really, really special. You'll always be. But if you really love me..." "What? I will do anything..." "If you really love me... can you let me go?"
What do you think? Feedback will really be appreciated.
Peace out!
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